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Chapter 3: To the Mansion

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With Felix's help, Betts and Olive find the mansion, and meet some of the residents within. 
 

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Felix gives Betts directions to the mansion, to which she asks if it's a far walk to get there.

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Betts says that Felix could take her and Olive to the mansion since he owns a car. Understandably, he isn't too keen on the idea.

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Betts convinces Felix to take them to the mansion. As an aside note, I don't really like the way I wrote this part. It feels a bit manipulative on Betts' part to make Felix drive her and Olive around, so if I ever do plan a rewrite of this story, I'd want to get rid of this part entirely.

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Felix drives the gals to the outskirts of town...

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...To an old, worn-down path in the woods. Felix tells them that the mansion is down that path, adding, "Please be careful."

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"We don't really know what we're getting ourselves into, Betts," Olive says. Betts responds simply: "We've got each other. We'll be fine."

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Olive, sensing several spirits at the mansion, doubts she's able to even step foot into the place. Betts reassures her, and the two gals approach the front porch.

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"Betts...this place is...alive." "Full of live ghosts, eh?"

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Discovering that there's a huge hole in the porch, the two decide to enter the mansion by climbing a tree and into a window on one of the upper levels.

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Betts jokes a bit about the dilapidated state of the house. They began to wander around.

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As they both descend to the main level of the house, Olive spies old letters and photographs attached to a mirror. However, she's unable to glean any information due to how old and faded they are.

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Olive realizes that she's alone, but perks up when she sees a figure disappearing around a corner.

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